Petr Swedock
1 min readMay 18, 2019

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Hello,

This is a glaring moment in an otherwise intelligent piece: not just the typo, the missing ‘with,’ but the notion of only one thing being intertwined… doesn’t follow.

I urge you to revisit this section and correct it.

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Petr Swedock
Petr Swedock

Written by Petr Swedock

An unwieldy mix of the sacred and the profane, uneasily co-existing in an ever more fragile shell. Celebrating no-shave Nov since Sept 1989.

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